Page 25: Chapter 2

Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)
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Ninabird 2nd Jun 2015, 6:00 AM Edit Delete
Ninabird
I hate picking onomatopoeic words. They simply never quite satisfy.

Comments:

ProfEtheric 2nd Jun 2015, 9:10 AM Edit Delete Reply
ProfEtheric
When you are bound, gagged, and hooded, you REALLY shouldn't try to take on an unbound force with superior numbers...

I feel your pain on the onomatopoeia. I tend to try and skip it, but sometimes you really can't.
Ninabird 2nd Jun 2015, 9:52 AM Edit Delete Reply
Ninabird
Yeah... don't really think he was thinking ahead in the last page! :)
Ninabird 2nd Jun 2015, 9:56 AM Edit Delete Reply
Ninabird
Hey, quick feedback request. Was the sequence of what happened in five, six, and seven on the last page physically unclear?
Delta-v 2nd Jun 2015, 8:55 PM Edit Delete Reply
Not at all. I'm pretty impressed that Tobin managed to put his leg in just the right place to surprise the soldier without being able to see, but the sequence was perfectly clear.

It's kinda hard not to feel sorry for Tobin..... Oh, who am I kidding. I don't feel sorry for the rat no matter what happens to him. He worked very hard to get where he is now, and he deserves every minute of it.
Ninabird 2nd Jun 2015, 9:36 PM Edit Delete Reply
Ninabird
Ha ha! That's what I like to hear. Tobin certainly is a rat. And thanks for the feedback on the panels! :)
Spelledeg 2nd Jun 2015, 12:58 PM Edit Delete Reply
Spelledeg
Oh don't do that man, he didn't mean it...okay he did. I like your choice of angles on this page, and poor Tobin. I did get a bit lost on panel 5 - I didn't connect that he was on his back at first since the front and back of his tunic are nearly identical and it's hard to see where his shoulders are in panel 5. It got cleared up by panel 6 though.

Onomatopoeia can be a pain, sooo much a pain. I usually find myself making the sound and trying to figure out what that translates to phonetically.
Ninabird 2nd Jun 2015, 3:45 PM Edit Delete Reply
Ninabird
Oh he meant it. He definitely meant it. :)

And I'm glad you think the angles work, as you are a master of angles.

I was actually asking about the previous page, but this is good to know too!
zaika 3rd Jun 2015, 9:18 AM Edit Delete Reply
zaika
Oooh, ouch.

Onomatopoeia. No thanks. :/ Too hard to figure out!!
Ninabird 3rd Jun 2015, 11:33 AM Edit Delete Reply
Ninabird
Yeah. They seem like a little bit of a cop out. Either that or just too reminiscent of Adam West Batman. :)
zaika 3rd Jun 2015, 1:44 PM Edit Delete Reply
zaika
Which would be awesome if he was actually in your comic! He could be there just for that. No othe reason. Lol
Ninabird 3rd Jun 2015, 3:54 PM Edit Delete Reply
Ninabird
Now that would be something! Hmm...

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